Something I don't think I'll ever get around to finishing

This is part of an RP test that I started and I'm stuck, but I probably will get it done by the end of the day. The setting and situation was given to us so I had to work off of that.

"If I had not witnessed the death of Rodric myself, I would have taken on the childish persona he knew so well and thrown my body against his wiry frame, clinging to him like a lovesick school girl in need of his touch. I restrained myself as best as I could instead, watching the image of my departed friend closely. As much as I wanted to believe it was him, I just. . couldn't. I refused to rewire myself to think that. I'd seen his form crumple from the impact of the bullet, and yet here he stood before me. I stared at Rodric, intent on finding the source of the iron grip on my stomach."


So far all I got :eek: What do you think?

I came.

Twice.

Very interesting
(i dont know what else to say)

I think you should write more. i liked it

It was a very good paragraph. Now come up with a back story, or something that starts from there on.

very nice
you must be pro rp-er

@ everyone: you guys gave me a confidence boost. I'll post the rest of what I wrote soon. I can't access it on my Wii ><

And I'm not pro. The people who RP in the threads I stalk, now they're badasses.

Wow,it is really nice.I am delighted to see your thread bunneh.I think you must write more.